Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Sung In D

The sun won’t rise
Until you wake up
I won’t breathe
Until you kiss me
The clock won’t change
Until you dance past
I’m not here
Until you see me

The night won’t fall
Until you’re tucked in
I’m not clean
Until you thrill me
The end won’t come
Until you say so
I won’t live
Until you love me

2 comments:

  1. I've read this 10 times and I have no critique. I love the association w/ time in the 1st stanza and I love the antonym with 'clean' in the last. Is there a full song?

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  2. Hey Nicole, sorry for the delayed response! There is a full song and she lives in New Hampshire. That kind of music can't be expressed in words though. Know what I mean?

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